SCP Foundation

Seeking Greenlights: Yes

Page Type: SCP Article

Genre (Optional): Drama/Emotional

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Elevator Pitch: A Computer monitor that cant be inserted into humans and animals, it would allow you to delete/add folders to the human.

Central Narrative: SCP-XXXX was made by the Anderson's Robotic's GOI in order to add setting to their products.When inserted into any lifeforms, it automatically inserts default AR Settings. These Settings include but are not limited to, Intermediate knowledge on Anderson's Robotics, Appropriate names to call Anderson(Which includes Master, Robot Jesus, SCP-343's Dad, and Andy.), knowledge on how to construct Anderson's Robotics products, and a list of Anderson's Robotics "Approved Knock Knock Jokes." It can be inserted into humans and animals through the anal cavity. SCP-XXXX can both delete and add memories and mental conditions and add anomalies to the subject. Anomalies that SCP-XXXX can add to a subject include the ability to control emotions at will, give/remove mental conditions from itself at will, and being able to put itself in and out of shock at will.

Hook/Attention-Grabber: it could also be used for cross-tests on SCPs. It being able to add anomalies is a great attention-grabber too, it allows me to be even more creative with my article and add unique anomalies involving "matters of the brain."

Additional Notes: The foundation could use it to erase memories to save money on amnestics.

When making a post hoping that there will be a greenlight, you got to include every main thing about your SCP. Saying that you'll expand on the story later means that you've given us a half baked idea, leading nobody wanting to greenlight you, the reason is the uncertainty of if you story would be good. Also another thing you should have grammar to anything you want to be taken into consideration on this website. There are some college level writing in these articles, and not having grammar doubts the critiquer if your capable of writing an article.

The SCP itself is a series 1 idea Short, simple, and generic. This SCP boils down to "a thing that access human's brains." Right now it doesn't seem to have no real substance, and doesn't have anything to draw me in. The only thing that peaked my interest is the "it could also be used for crosstests on humanoid SCPs" but if the only thing interesting about your SCP is relying on other SCPs isn't good for an idea.

A good way to make an SCP more interesting is if you added a narrative that would make the audience feel one or more of there emotions, fear, emotional, funny, etc. A good example is SCP 5000, sure the mecha suit on its own is generic, but the story is gold and makes you wonder what happened.
I recommend reading
http://www.scp-wiki.net/mackenzie-pitfalls
http://www.scp-wiki.net/an-exercise-in-narrative-based-scps
http://www.scp-wiki.net/a-dime-a-dozen