SCP Foundation

Oh my god, I just realized what the fear monster actually is. That’s genius. A great use of an older SCP.

Also, I like seeing Dr. King again.

Hey, I don't like the rebranding too. It just bothers me when something still has a Twitter Icon.

I’ve always liked the trope where someone laughs at the big scary villain and mocking them because in reality they’re not scary at all. And that trope is used perfectly here.

I’m loving this series so far. This is great.

Hi! My name is Jelly/Jellybud.

I tend to hyperfixate on my interests until the next one comes by, and so on and so forth. The list of things I enjoy is so long I cannot list it here, even if I tried! The SCP universe has been one of those hyperfixations, so I joined the site in order to vote for all my favourite articles. As an artist, I would also like to contribute some art someday.

The last plant I saw would be the handpicked mimosa flower my friend gifted me that I pressed in my private law textbook. The book was so thick, it was really effective for that non-intended purpose…

I’m not spoiling anything, but wow that reveal with Alison is really exciting. And the Goatman also took Weiss’ credit card, lol.

like many I've read many Hundreds maybe even Thousands of SCP many were better written or more interesting than this and yet those fade but this for all that it is permeates my mind with a glow of fondness unlike any other

+1 for not the Best SCP but my favorite for what little that's worth from your friendly neighborhood nobody

A rewrite effort of this article by SynthPanda_ has been approved. Expect to see it at some point in the future.

Weiss just got deaged because of her fear of aging. That’s very interesting, and I look forward to seeing how this affects Weiss in the future.

Site 55 dossier real!!!! Man I really gotta rewriting 6127. Regardless, happy to finally see this up.

This tale really taps into those fears where the world is on fire, everything is going bad, and there’s nothing that anybody can do about it. That’s very gripping.

Good concept, but falls flat and uninteresting because of poor execution. SCP-4857 is a better example of this.

I don't like it mainly because I feel like the Foundation would not pay too much mind to this item. It's a camera that messes with people's perception, not sure how this could be interpreted as indicating the existence of a race of anomalous creatures walking among the human populace. Or maybe I am either stupid or not paying enough attention.

Either way, for now, it's a -1 from me.

Yeah, that was a nice read. I do have a few issues with the article, though.

I enjoyed the beginning a lot because it reminded me of the communication within my department of the administration I work for. Especially how you ask people for help on something XD

The building up to the devlogs was good. First, remove the meme to get it accessible… I did wonder why Lillihamer would just abandon a project like this. Struck me as somewhat unprofessional. But things are a bit different at Site-43 I guess.

With the devlogs, I feel like there was a bit of potential left undiscovered. The person says they discovered interesting things, things humanity shouldn't know about, and how their life has been severely affected. But then it trails off and there are no details or strange info… That would have contributed to the atmosphere a lot I think.
It's the same thing with the discussion of Zwist. It comes in a bit suddenly and there's not much more on him despite what's stated in the mail.

All in all, I feel like you have a very decent structure, but I just can't get into the atmosphere. It feels a bit rushed.

The ending comes in stronger again, though. I'll check the link out.

No vote.

Darn right it is

So the antagonist in this is a manifestation of people’s fears. And this series is set in 2020, when a bunch of terrible things happened and there was a lot of anxiety abound. It would make the most sense for a fear monster to show up at Sloth’s Pit during 2020, and all of this creates a very interesting antagonist.

I like the final interview, but I feel like the article would be even more terrifying without it. The interview serves to significantly antagonize but simultaneously humanize SCP-3003-2, and the thought of this entity being one without principles and ethics is way scarier to me.

Still, I gave it a +1.

I feel like this would work a little better if the pay raise notice and the emails were put at the end of the article.

Still made me laugh a little though. +1

This is really cute and sweet. I'm a big fan of this.

I've gone back and forth the past week on if I love or hate this addition. I was fully expecting you to pull a bait-and-switch with Iris but nope, she is actually gone. The previous part of this amazing storyline that you've written has grown me to love these characters even more, and now you've started the 2nd part tearing my heart into pieces. It's great writing, and although I still get a strong pang of sadness when I go to this tale, I'm still exciting to where it goes next. Excellent work.

Is this a a Spongebob reference?

Patrick Star: "WHAT KIND OF PLACE IS THIS?"

Here we go again.

I like this introduction. It’s a great catch-up for those who haven’t seen the other three Black Autumns, and it’s a fun recap for those who did. What I also like is that this series is turning towards character work and character growth even more than the series before it, but it’s also still retaining the Halloween charm like the other series.

Yeah, I’m liking this so far.